maybe have sections where the bass comes in super low and heavy separated by longer sections without it. that would help this track have a lot more dynamics and really 'pop' where it needs to
either way this is sick as is. keep at it, you're definitely on to a vibe
as for critique: this is me so of course i'd say this, but i think this could really benefit from some bass- even just a simple 2 note pattern. you've got some really nice drums and cool sample chopping going on but i just think they could be glued together more effectively.
Try a remix, use the slide part and add a fast drum and bass beat. Try using a space echo note or echos and sample. Use Presets. Keep Plugging away. Just a thought. The mind is a way to imagine something from nothing.
once you pic a preset at the bottom you will see three piano keys click on it and it will send you to a page to make notes. you can make long or shot notes just play around. There are space that are white box, and blue box too.