Cover of track luccio (demo) by youdontknowme (archive)
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luccio (demo)

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fuck

didn't mean for it to turn out this way but it did (this is not an edgy message about my life I'm just upset that this song didn't turn out how I wanted it to)

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    joe

    gonna give some maybe not positive feedback so tw

    it sounds like you just tried to extend one 16bar loop.

    i wish it brought in something unexpected or changed one of the building blocks you have going on.

    some part of me wished that after the bridge ( if u wanna call it that) the song developed more. :/

    idk

    it just feels monotone in a way.

    i like the groove, i like the use of the old school percs, and i like the vibe. that being said, it doesnt tell a story or make me feel things

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      youdontknowme (archive)

      I tend to struggle with this problem a lot haha, thanks anyways.

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      ag.

      ye this would be so much better if some more sounds were introduced after the first 30 seconds

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    Vault Boy

    marshmallows when he first started type beat

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    Roy ↨

    My mom grounded me and now Im mad type beat

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    youdontknowme (archive)

    Republished

    forgot to turn the volume back up lololol